I think this will be great when it's finished. You always have really good compositional ideas. I agree with Melissa that the sky seems pretty busy. I think it would be interesting to have more colors going on either in the rocks or figures or something. Good stuff Jared :)
I think this will be great when it's finished. You always have really good compositional ideas. I agree with Melissa that the sky seems pretty busy. I think it would be interesting to have more colors going on either in the rocks or figures or something. Good stuff Jared :)
Really great shapes in the rocks! I love the way they define the space of the picture - there's a lot of depth there! I also love the gesture of the second figure - though, regrettably, I didn't notice him at first. That might be because of how much is happening in the top left corner of the picture. Anyways, it looks awesome!
The composition looks really cool and the values are awesome. I just wish things were more defined. The sky maybe has too much going on though?
ReplyDeleteI think this will be great when it's finished. You always have really good compositional ideas. I agree with Melissa that the sky seems pretty busy. I think it would be interesting to have more colors going on either in the rocks or figures or something. Good stuff Jared :)
ReplyDeleteI think this will be great when it's finished. You always have really good compositional ideas. I agree with Melissa that the sky seems pretty busy. I think it would be interesting to have more colors going on either in the rocks or figures or something. Good stuff Jared :)
ReplyDeleteReally great shapes in the rocks! I love the way they define the space of the picture - there's a lot of depth there! I also love the gesture of the second figure - though, regrettably, I didn't notice him at first. That might be because of how much is happening in the top left corner of the picture. Anyways, it looks awesome!
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