A story I made up ! A creepy spaghetti princess and a boy who wants to be a friend with her.
And I'm really sorry for the people who I commented twice, my computer is just keep posting them more then twice and I'm trying to figure it out how to fix it...sorry!!
Beautiful! The narrative really draws me in! I'd love to see what it would look like with softer edges.
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! I miss the second ghost. But everything here is so cool!!! I just love how creeper out the boy is
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is really creative TJ. I like what you have going on with the centered composition. I'm wondering if that's a ghost behind the girl in the back? Maybe it could have a smokier feeling to it. And maybe some more of the room in the background would be cool. That spaghetti looks good ;)
ReplyDeleteHey it turned out really great. Just a few things that you might want to work on is that the boy's upper part of shoulders are getting lost in the light. Probably to exaggerate or enlarge the shadow part will solve it. Also, I would watch out for the values or colors between the table and the background so that they can be distinguished. If I were you I would make the background darker. Nice work, TJ!!
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