The composition looks really cool and the values are awesome. I just wish things were more defined. The sky maybe has too much going on though?
I think this will be great when it's finished. You always have really good compositional ideas. I agree with Melissa that the sky seems pretty busy. I think it would be interesting to have more colors going on either in the rocks or figures or something. Good stuff Jared :)
Really great shapes in the rocks! I love the way they define the space of the picture - there's a lot of depth there! I also love the gesture of the second figure - though, regrettably, I didn't notice him at first. That might be because of how much is happening in the top left corner of the picture. Anyways, it looks awesome!